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To know your touch is to know the dew
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To know your touch is to know the dew |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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To know your touch is to know the dew of morning's bending light upon stone walked. Each forward step I step closer to you near the stairs where we once sat and talked. If but the sky would shake anew some rain in drops' cascade upon the waiting street then you would out of doors cross by the pane and enter cafe where our words find meet. Dark drinks would warm the coldness of our hands. The rain would place gray diamonds in your hair. I would tell you of the hills and lands where I travel well beyond your care. Alas, I know that day is not to be. For you are still with him, and I with me. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Oh Mike, this is perfect. (Find a magazine and submit this!!) |
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palmerj Junior Member
since 2002-11-06
Posts 30Coxsackie, NY |
Wow this poem is deep. I am sorry to say I am in the same situation it seems with a girl I like. Goodluck man as all you and me can do is wait. =( |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
beautiful!! Charisma |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
A lovely write Mike. Simply lovely  |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thank you everyone. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I agree, this is sure a poem that could easily be published, and it is simply fantastic Mike. The feelings it evokes are incredible in such a short poem, I loved it, and the style you wrote it in. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ohmygosh Mike! I simply love this. Wonderful piece, so full of deep emotions. Great write. ~Hugs~ ~Let your heart guide you... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thank you, my Canadian friends.  I watched Shakespeare in Love last night. |
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