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smitty-j Member
since 2002-09-13
Posts 72Florida, USA 
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There’s a spirit crushing mine, stealing time I try to find. Taking breath I need to live, wanting more the more I give. The shadow follows everywhere, I’m not alone, it sees me there. It hides behind a lovers face, till once again my soul it tastes. It haunts the darkness in my dreams, says come to me in whispered screams. Lies behind a smiling mask, the death of me its hidden task. It knows not it’s devouring me, my spirit lost, to its own greed. Slowly dying, killing dreams, shows me what true darkness means. My spirit fades into the night, lost till one can bring new light. Julie [This message has been edited by smitty-j (11-11-2002 09:35 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Melanie Good thoughts, good write, good read. |
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smitty-j Member
since 2002-09-13
Posts 72Florida, USA |
LOL...got the wrong girl Seymour..but thanks anyway  Julie |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Julie, this is a very good poem...very sad to me, but very well written. Thanks for sharing. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
Excellent explaination for a shadow. Thank you. etoodog |
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