A Revised Repost...Your Weeping Violins

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Open Poetry #23

A Revised Repost...Your Weeping Violins

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

0 posted 2002-11-11 06:53 AM

Your weeping violins
filling my heart with
the stacatto of your soul;
and your melodious tunes
voicing the dulcet
presence of love. High pitched
tones swelling my heart
with their softly, melodic
whisperings. You...bowing gentle
stirrings across your strings.
Rhapsodic notes building, capturing
my heart with their tonal beauty.

Playing passionate love songs
that seek my love-eager ears.
A sweet symphony. Known only
to me...your adored one who listens
for the love in your exquisite
rhapsodies, in your weeping violins.

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2002-11-11 11:16 AM

Ivy Rose,
I never saw the first...but this is so nice. Much is hidden in these words about the intensity of a love relationship. Thank you.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-11-11 03:42 PM

(smiles) This is sooooooo beautifully sensual, sweet friend, I love it, somehow violins always come to my mind when I think of my love Joanna, like the angels are playing for us on our honeymoon! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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