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For You I Get So Lonely, Baby
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For You I Get So Lonely, Baby |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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For you I get so lonely, Baby, almost more than I can bear, Hurts deep inside my heart, my Love, a feeling I know you share Even in a crowded room full of friends we know We put on a happy face our pain try not to show But there among all our friends, we feel so lonely and blue For though the room is full, you're not with me, nor me with you If on a deserted island, you and I were to be We never would be lonely at all for together, you and me Or on a mountain top so high way, way up in the sky If you and I were there Together with love, we'd sigh For in a crowded restaurant eating with friends our meal Without each other our food to share how lonesome we would feel So, Baby, the point I mean to make in my own feeble little way Is you and I won't feel complete until in each others arms we can stay "Love makes the world go around" |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I defiently know how this feels. Good write. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I know you do, Julie. I'm so sorry that you feel these hurtful feelings. I'm sure your Liam feels them, too. "Love makes the world go around" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 oh, I hope you get together and stay together soon... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Dixie, thank you so much for reading my poem and for your reply. I really appreciate your comment. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
garysgirl, I hope you can soon feel complete in each others arms, wishes of the heart are sometimes hard to come by, one day in a crowded room you might feel as close as if on your island, then the unity of souls will be complete. Goodluck, I enjoyed the write, much enjoyed. Sincerely Rick |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) Oh Ethel, I know these yearnful feelings so much, so many nights when I long for Joanna and realize I don't have her when I know that already, I cry because she is so beautiful and I want her so much! (sigh) I wish for you and Gary to be together forever real soon, you are so deserving of this true happiness, I wish it with all my heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Rick........thanks so very much for reading my poem. I appreciate your comments very much. Noah....... I know that you totally understand my feelings. I also hope that you and Joanna will soon be together for always. "Love makes the world go around" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, James. I'm glad that you liked it. "Love makes the world go around" |
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