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Inner Sanctum |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Ripples of mental fractures Goose bumps of mind treks Deep sensations quaking Dark voids of inner space Deep penetrations impregnating The most inner sanctum Isolation so concentrated Impenetrable jungle of mass confusion Mental scars of razor blades Black ghosts stand guard A deadly chill of absolute zero Shattering shards of memory Black hole siphoning negativity Within the vast reaches of the soul Draining life’s forces The power to be understood Lies in the most excruciating pain Of fighting lethal demons Suffocation from social norms You seek the meditation Releasing your worst nightmares The implosion will make you insane Or propel you to the next level of awareness Setting you free without boundaries Thought: To be enlightened in the power of life’s beauty, you first must navigate the darkness of your fears. D.Lester Young 11/10/2002 Tuscaloosa, AL Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry) |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I love it Cold hands means a warm heart |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Well, this almost gave me a headache, it is so interesting.....and, I agree with your: Thought. It is absolutely correct. Hmmmmmm... Not much to say, except I have "astral projected", and didn't go insane..... but when I realized what was happening fear brought me right back to reality faster than ~getting to where I was going before I left~. Make sense? Also, I didn't personally have nightmares I literally lived them from day one....and never had those dark demons, some DO, though, how horrible. Enjoyed.....greatly  A real thinking piece. You are very talented, and I will look for more of your work. Thank You. Warm Regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. "Desiderata" [This message has been edited by regards2you (11-10-2002 11:02 PM).] |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow, extremely well presented with stellar vocabulary and images. You're obviously a very deep individual and it shines through in your intensity and words of wisdom~ Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
You are an absolutely incredible writer......very talented poet. "Love makes the world go around" |
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