Open Poetry #23 |
Lonely |
the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Tonight I sit at the computer Thinking about how lonely I am I have nobody to talk to No TV to watch until 8 I am so bored As I wait on messenger For someone to talk to But nobody shows up Except Liam for a split second While I was doing chores Come to find out I hate being alone But I survive I live on In this lonely state This lonely state of mind Cold hands means a warm heart |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
There you go again, capturing a simple, little moment in time which we all go through sometimes, and I can certainly relate to. (Least you have Liam, lucky girl!) smiling..... Warm Regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
Yea... it's those moments that give me my ultimate strength. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) Oh Julie, I'm so sorry you've had to endure all this lately, sweet friend, rest assured that this time will pass and you will find all the joy your heart desires, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Sorry about your lonelyness. Here is one of my lonely posts /pip/Forum74/HTML/001518.html Sigh.... "Sticks and stones will break my bones, |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Julie, I'm so sorry that your feeling this way. I have Gary, but because he's not right here with me all the time, I get very lonely sometimes. Even if I'm in a crowded room full of my friends, I still get lonely when Gary isn't right there with me. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
I think you capture loneliness well. I like the way you link the lack of people around you to this important feeling. Thank you. etoodog [This message has been edited by Robert Adamson (11-11-2002 04:54 AM).] |
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