Open Poetry #23 |
Wait For Me |
ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
the wind did not listen it flew away with my memory leaving dust-covered scraps of oblivion in the shell of its infinity all the yesterdays are gone and tommorrow is too close wait for me...... copyright061967A1S/Stewart2002 The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) Oh Eric, this is so hauntingly sad, sweet friend, I hope all is alright and now today great bliss swirls all around you as tomorrow I'm sure will offer much blessings to you! (sigh) Count your many blessings, sweet friend, this is heartfelt, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
everything's fine Noah and thanks for the expression of concern I appreciate it very much. Just a little artistic road out of the past that I went down again. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ethome - I truly understand the road of the past to travel... Nice write... BC |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Seems we are destined to go down this road much too often. We need some road blocks placed strategically I think. A very poignant piece. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes nicely done... some roads traveled stay etched in our minds forever.. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Eric, I like your poem, though it has a twinge of sadness. Try to think of the good memories that make you happy. Okay? (I know it's really hard at times to keep the sad memories out of our heads). Thanks for sharing. Love To All, Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (10-15-2002 03:40 PM).] |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Eric, it's been a while since I have read your words, its good to read your poetry again. Wonderfully written. El riesgo vive siempre! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Eric Emotive and real...a feeling well worded. Different style for you...much enjoyed! |
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