Open Poetry #23 |
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Solemn |
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dougsbird21 Member
since 2002-11-08
Posts 52London(from TX though) |
Solemn I see you make me laugh reach out in pure darkness see you see me don’t you dare touch me I am untouchable in synch within my own solemn in my i n s a n i t y |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big huggssssss) Such intensity fills your words, sweet friend, I hope everything is alright, this is powerful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lisa, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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mrmuse New Member
since 2002-11-10
Posts 6 |
well the person above this reply of mine obviously likes the poem. But what is she so damn happy about? calm down woman! yep, its a good write. how can i say it? erm, it's solemn. ![]() |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Noah is a he, and if you will take the time to read some of those who do respond( their works I mean) you will realize that he is always this friendly...and doesn't need calming down... just another hint...be one person under your poem that you post, respond in that person..and there will be less confusion for others. I know I am not a moderator, but I am just trying to be a "friend". ~smiling~ still M [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (11-10-2002 01:25 PM).] |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
A-M-E-N !!!!!!!!!!!!!! , Maureen!!!!! (sorry I didn't know how to write this any bigger, or I would have !!!!) "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I'm so sorry, Lisa, but that reply from the other "person" got me VERY upset. I really do like your poem. It has a lot of truth in it and is very well written. I like the way you put it on the paper.(I don't know the technical word for that) "Love makes the world go around" |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
dougsbird21/mrmuse, First let me welcome you to Passions. From what I've read of your work so far, I think you have talent. I'm sure you will come to appreciate the various personalities here as you familiarize yourself with their writings and replies. A measure of respect and restraint are in order, without which, you will find, you won't be happy here. Also, if you wish to use different user names, that's your perogative, many here do use different ones. But it will only lead to confusion if you switch back and forth between those different user names within the same post, as Maureen stated. Also, it will bump the poem to the top when you reply with a different user name than what you originally used for the post, and that is something that is not tolerated here, and we moderators do have our ways of checking into this if we have our suspicions that someone is doing that. Please take the time, if you haven't already, to familiarize yourself with the guidelines of the forums. This will insure that the time you spend here is mutually enjoyable. |
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