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Kristine
Member

since 2002-10-30

Posts 92
Mahal Kita!!!

0 posted 2002-11-09 03:37 AM

Oh, the one who left me in the cold,
With nothing; screaming at the sky.
Not knowing whether I would live or die.

I prayed about this 'dear' of mine,
everynight, for God to show him
the wrong and the right.

I cried out his name during times
I felt so alone.He was never there;
My heart should've known.

All he needed was trust
and understanding.
If only he believed in our love...
-everlasting.

Sometimes Love is like awkward poetry, the words may not be just right
but when love comes freely from the heart the message sings!

[This message has been edited by Kristine (11-09-2002 03:41 AM).]

Connel

Senior Member

since 2002-11-04

Posts 736
Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-11-09 09:20 AM

Beautiful poem... I really enjoyed... Thank you so much for posting... Kinda cought my eye cuzz it said my name.

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2002-11-09 12:04 PM

A good cry, and the title left me thinking you are already on your way to putting him in the past.
Maybe.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-11-09 12:32 PM

Kristine, this is really a beautiful poem, just sad to me. I always feel for someone who has lost a love, but am glad to see when someone is healing from the hurt. Thanks for sharing with us.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-11-09 08:24 PM

(sigh) Oh Kristine, this is powerful, sweet friend, you always express your thoughts so well, this is heartfelt, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristine, thank you for sharing!