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Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

0 posted 2002-11-09 01:16 AM

Flight of night
in pure delight,
captured thoughts
in filtered light
aloft in dreams.
I hear the loon sing
as the moon fades...
and midnite screams,
'tis morning too soon!

reluctantlyme
Junior Member

since 2002-10-28

Posts 34

1 posted 2002-11-09 01:26 AM

I hear the loon sing
as the moon fades...
and midnite screams,
'tis morning too soon!

This was a very soothing poem to read, until all that screaming started! Enjoyed the song like feel.

No matter how good looking she is... someone, somewhere is glad she's gone.
---Davey's helmet

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2002-11-09 01:34 AM

Dontcha just hate it when something awakens you in the middle of a really great dream?
Makes me scream.

Thank you for reading and replying, reluctantly.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-11-09 01:38 AM

As always, Kacy, you have penned a very good poem with lots of thoughts to ponder. Thanks for sharing.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Crysania
Member

since 2002-09-21

Posts 67
Lost in a dream. (Please don't wake!)

4 posted 2002-11-09 02:15 AM

I agree. Morning has a way of sneaking up on you, unwanted, doesn't it? But then, when you finally fully awake (just in time to see the sunrise), how can you be angry with something that paints the sky so beautifully? Like a child who raids the cookie jar but is too cute to get scolded. *purses lips*

Love and Light!
Stephanie

True friends are not those who are with you at the end, but those who helped you through the journey.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2002-11-09 02:18 AM

Ethel, thanks, glad you are a night owl too!
Crysania, hello, nice to meet you. LOL, yes, who can cry at a sunshiney sky?

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

6 posted 2002-11-09 09:14 AM

Now this is a poem worth screaming about. Gosh, I really enjoyed it. I am not a morning person and just hate to get out of bed,

Great writing -- hugs, Marti

"I am not afraid of STORMS
for I have learned how to sail my
SHIP." Louisa May Alcott

(I'm not changing this for anyone!)

Connel

Senior Member

since 2002-11-04

Posts 736
Florida, USA

7 posted 2002-11-09 09:17 AM

Nice poem. Enjoyed the read... Thanks for sharing.

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

8 posted 2002-11-09 09:35 AM

Sometimes I wish the nights would never end...*s

hugs
M

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2002-11-09 09:49 AM

enjoyed

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2002-11-09 08:00 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I just love this, sweet friend, this is beautiful! (kiss on cheek) I too wouldn't like to be woken up to the sound of a loon...or a rooster, ahhhhhh, hehehe, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

11 posted 2002-11-09 10:13 PM

Marti, Connell, Maureen, Noah, thanks!
Actually, I love the loon's tunes, Noah.
It's the waking-up-just-as-the-cool-dream part starts that makes me scream.

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