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dougsbird21
Member

since 2002-11-08

Posts 52
London(from TX though)

0 posted 2002-11-08 10:39 PM

Hard to describe

It’s not writing when you’re
feeling it
Emotion more than
words Like
emptying my soul on
paper But more sacred than it
sounds Something
that connects the outs of me with
the in Helps
me understand more or
less the alls and ends of everything No
something or other Maybe
nothing but none the less a
retreat A
let go and be An
attempt if nothing
more

Write what you feel, not what u think you should feel.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-11-08 11:02 PM

(sigh) Oh Lisa, I'm so happy you're here, you have such wonderful talent! Life is indeed filled with so many conjunctions that are so short and look simple yet they are the biggest mysteries of all! (big hugggsssss) Whatever you do, always release a sigh of hope that speaks yet, then add a because as in "because you live, because you are born to shine!" (smiles) This is excellent, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lisa, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

2 posted 2002-11-09 08:02 AM

Oh, but I do like your style!!!! This is really unique, and I hope that you do lots more!! By the way, I see that you are in London via Texas. Well, I am in Stoke-on-Trent via Alaska!! Email me sometime, as it would be fun to compare notes!!!!!

Pen how you truly feel...
it is a safety-valve for the soul!

dougsbird21
Member

since 2002-11-08

Posts 52
London(from TX though)

3 posted 2002-11-09 08:20 AM

Oh, but I do like your style!!!! This is really unique, and I hope that you do lots more!!
----
Thanx for the praise! Alaska huh?! Wow! HOw dya like England? Stoke on Trent...that's really far from London I think--too bad--I'd love ta meet some friends here!! Anyway, thanks for commenting on my poem--I like how u comment on it in an honest fashion, without all the mooshy gooshy, soulistic words..haha. I think sometimes people try to weave their poetic way of writing into normal discussion and that kinda annoys me..haha. Speak soon!

Lisa

"Write what you feel, not what u think you should feel."

Connel

Senior Member

since 2002-11-04

Posts 736
Florida, USA

4 posted 2002-11-09 08:38 AM

Nice poem,

Thanks for sharing.

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

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