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"TWENTY OR LESS...#73"
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"TWENTY OR LESS...#73" |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
"TWENTY OR LESS...#73" Copyright 2002 by:MARK V SHELDON climbing hidden walls seeking altered light my vision no longer blurs time found you fading behind me "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nice.. I can read totally opposite meaning into this... depending on how one pauses and puts emphasis on a word... good stuff.... subtle in so many ways.. yet direct |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
I guess pauses are relative to the timeline in which one finds himself... Thanks Ron. -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Mark, I just love the way you bent the light in this one, sweet friend, this had me envisioning a man opening up his medicine cabinet and seeing all these reflections of himself then closing the door like piecing himself together and there he is now! (big hugggssssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mark, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
walls crumbling light peeking through tomorrow's view moments away 10 or less ..you always make this fun *s M |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
(20 or less) Uniform Outline seeking you through yesterday’s shadows lost in hidden light lives silhouetted souls |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Even when I close my eyes the light that was you burns against my lids. ~So pleased you're back Mark!~ Hugs. ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Noah, that's a very poignant image. I like it.  Thanks for your thoughts.Maureen, it's fun because people like yourself participate and share. Thank you for your interpretation. 1slick_lady... that's a gem. Thank you for sharing its shine.  Wow, Nancy! You make me very proud. You've got yourself one here that epitomizes TOL -- you should post it a level higher so all can read it!  -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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