Open Poetry #23 |
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She Shortened The Time |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown ![]() |
~ By Sue ~ To live on his parents land was not good Many times I tried to get him to move To move to a place that would be ours My home I did not want to lose He always had reasons why we could not I had fear of what would happen to me If something were to happen to him But, this is something he could not see I did not think about us splitting up Together forever I thought we would be Too many things started going wrong Then he just up and walked out on me His mother and I never got along A month after he left his father died She gave me until July to get off her land It turns out that she had lied She all of a sudden shortened the time This is what I was afraid she would do With me unable to get around very good What I am going to do I have no clue 11-7-02 |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggsssssss) Oh Sue, I'm so very sorry you went through so much, sweet friend, this is indeed such an ordeal and now I wish you both great comfort and healing and hope all goes well and you can be helped and reached out to! (sigh) I send angel hugs your way, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Connel![]()
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
I truely enoyed your poem. Please, please, keep writing, are are a skilled/gifted person. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hi Sue, You are in my thoughts and prayers. Things have a way of working out...you'll see. Just take one day at a time. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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*Stubby* Member
since 2002-09-19
Posts 122 |
Nobody needs that you deserve much better J *S* |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sue, I'm so sorry. I went through about the same thing with my late husband's sister. It's a long story, so I won't go all into it. Anyway, I'm not even staying over at my own house now. I use it more for storing my furniture and stuff. It's sad when these family conflicts happen. I am so thankful for really good friends (Gary's family included) Love makes the world go 'round (unkown) with love and hugs from Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (11-07-2002 08:53 PM).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
*hugs* this is such a sad situation....I hope it all works out for you |
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