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Beach
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Beach |
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BabyGirl721 Junior Member
since 2002-11-07
Posts 12California, USA |
I paint a picture of a beach It's so beautiful All the colors so perfect together Red and oranges of the sunset, Blues of the ocean and sky, And the grey of the sand Wishing I was there, In the calm and beautifuk place Laying in the soft sand, Listening to waves clash on the water, Not thinking about anything If only life were that calm and beautiful But it's not It's not beautiful and calm like the beach It's full of surprises Good and bad We never know what will happen Just how they say: "That's Life!" Why not just make it beautiful? Make life sweet Make it all worthwhile |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
I enjoyed this sweet write and wish you luck. etoodog |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Lovely poem. Enjoyed it. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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BabyGirl721 Junior Member
since 2002-11-07
Posts 12California, USA |
Thank you very much  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) I too wish all life could be like that, where we can relax and abandon capitalism and government if only everyone can realize the simple creed of harmony! (sigh) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, I love the pastoral painting here, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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