A Girl and The Ghost prt. 3

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the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-10-14 12:12 PM

The ghost went on,
"I died in this very room
To this day it still has the smell of doom
I did not die
I was killed by my girlfriend's
Jealous ex boyfriend.
She begged him not to
But it was too late."

The girl's eyes started filling
With tears
It stung so bad
As she tried to hold back
The tears of pain
She felt for the poor ghost

The ghost moved closer
And said,
"Don't cry over me miss.
I have been haunting this room
For over 50 years
And your the first to move in
That reminds me of my girlfriend."

The girl smiled at the ghost
And said,
"I have never known a ghost to be
So nice
To people of the human world.
What made you this way
And why are you so kind to me
Other than I look like your girlfriend
Of 50 years ago?"

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I am gonna keep ya'll in suspense. LOL

Cold hands means a warm heart

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2002-10-14 12:16 PM

the_loner_23
Well you have me in suspense. Enjoyed

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2002-10-14 12:29 PM

You kept your promise! You wrote part 3 !!

---you keep building the suspense! There will be a part 4, won't there?!?

EA

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-10-14 02:33 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, at least for now he doesn't seem like a bad ghost, ooohhhhh...but how do we know? Now you're making me shiver again with your ongoing sequels, LOL, can't wait for yet the next part, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!