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On the Other Side |
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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
I can feel depression wanting to set in this movement only of fingers touching the unneccessary wanting to feel, even if, only if answers are waiting on the other side... Looking at you, ageless of memory edged in gold, aspiring to be, yet already am immersed in reunion, behind the facade dancing the truth alone in a crowd. On the other side, failing to fall until the last of the dreamers lose their way. ~A~ |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
do you know,I loved every word.....  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Thought provoking and auspicious write. Agree with SEA...loved every word. ThisDiamond |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Really beautiful poem.. Good Job! I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I enjoyed this much, and I know how quickly the depression can set in. Hugs. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 maybe it's the mood I'm in but this one struck me somewhere deep inside, and brought out tears. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Alice, my heart goes out to you, sweet friend, I used to feel this intoxication all the time and how quickly the grief perverted my veins and my heart goes out to you in hoping soon this all passes by, God Bless You, know you are in good hands, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alice, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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quietlydying
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz |
quite literally, i am speechless. you did an amazing job on this one. quote: i don't think i can even begin to comment on that one line in particular. it's too perfect to touch. excellent write. /jen/ what if they gave a war, and nobody came... |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
A There is so much to say about this write, i don't know where to begin. "wanting to feel, even if, only if answers are waiting on the other side..." answers are there somewhere "dancing the truth alone in a crowd" oh don't i feel this way sometimes.. and for the ending... hope i never stop dreaming, and loosing my way within them. Really love this write. Library it goes.... Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
opps forgot the library button,,, that's what i get for hitting the tab button to quickly A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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blues hearted lady New Member
since 2002-11-07
Posts 9Melbourne, AUS |
take heart in the fact that the last of the dreamers will never fall. Not until their dreams come true, anyways... take it easy. bhl |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Amazing write and some gems, yet I like the image of touching to feel, which is an image I could hold forever. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
Thank you, all who have responded to this poem. I was just trying to express how easily depression can come over you. But that the other side is there if you can just see through the mist. ~A~ |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
It reads like sharing a tear. And I know the crowd-unease of which you verse. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
And sometimes the mist is a bit too thick to see through isn't it? I knew I was going to enjoy reading you when I saw your name. Thanks for a great read Maree. p.s I loved every line too  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I'm glad I saw this one again...good one! |
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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
*s thank you Mike, I had forgotten about this one, guess my days were looking up  Dark Angel There are days whenI just sit behind that mist...and wait. The name I use is because there are times when I feel I am looking at myself from the other side of the mirror. Thank you, Maree. Dixie, thank you again for rereading me. Don't you ever sleep? hugssssss ~A~ |
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