Open Poetry #23 |
Musings |
Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Within my angry protestations, ...lays a plea of desperation, Screaming out unto the night, ...searching, seeking of the light, Countless signs to guide the way, ...so many paths from which to stray, Knowing not if day is done, ...in shadows of a dying sun, I walk alone as I traverse, ...upon stone walk, to seek asperse, Footsteps lead in paths unbending, ...twisting, curving trails unending, Unbroken silence of the night, ...waveless, tideless Luna's light, Brooding over all living things, ...hushing even cicada's wings, In echo of night's silent spasm, ...I walk alone into night's chasm. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Tim, Don't we all, enjoyed the read. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Enjoyed the read. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
With your poetry, you offer so much variety to the reader. This of course, is not one of your soft, gentle, feel good ones---but it is riveting and powerful! EA |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
No, no, with this writing, you take us with you. Isn't it nice to have a day where you can sit back, and reflect a bit on all that is before you, and how, by the mere flick of ink, you can change the currents of so many... like us. Thank you, Sir... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
yes...like us. thanks again. |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Never stop musing, Tim! The results are always wonderful! |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
This is so remarkably powerful, it took my breath away! Thank you so much to help me know how I was feeling. Quite a gift you have. Thank you so much for sharing it with us. With Warm Regards, ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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