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Again..Uh-uh...don't waste a word
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Again..Uh-uh...don't waste a word |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon 
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So it's a story you want I write no words the same, that ain't right. Not to repeat one single phrase now is like my old school days, assignments too difficult for me composing without dittoing. Turning here, twisting there flipping speech into air watch as falling happens quick this, dear poet, was some trick. WhiteRose [This message has been edited by WhiteRose (11-06-2002 10:02 PM).] |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
If it was easy.Anybody could do it. paladin |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Thank you paladin..I think  |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
WhiteRose, You used the word "this" three times. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
I only found it repeated twice, and revised. Thanks for catching that. Am I just blind and can't see the other one? [This message has been edited by WhiteRose (11-06-2002 10:03 PM).] |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
great bit rose! |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Thanks so much majnu, you're comments are always appreciated.  |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Anne, I loved the last three lines. Fun read! Warm Regards, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay!!! Oh Anne, you did it and you did it so well! (kiss on cheek) Your talent is amazing, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, hank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Pat, thank you so much for reading and responding. I kinda like the last three lines too. By then I was quite desperate for new words. Noah, as always, you are a dear and you fill this place with your warmth whenever you are here. Thank you for reading and responding. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Rose darling heart This is simply one of the best I’ve seen in a long time. I truly don’t get here enough but there is only so much time in the day. I’m glad I didn’t get to miss this utter beauty it is extremely special the writing is perfect and again you have written pure gold. Beautiful work really beautiful  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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