Open Poetry #23 |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA ![]() |
Casey, my cat Kept me up last night First time he woke me up It was 1:45 AM Dumb cat The second time was 2:45 AM I was like I have had enough of that I had made plans For 8:30 this morning But after last night I said forget that And went back to bed Then I had to do dishes And feed the indoor and outdoor cats And give them clean water How previledged they are I ate lunch And got online for awhile Talked to a couple friends Then had to get off And clean the kitty litter boxes All 4 of them Then I had to feed the outdoor kitties again It is like they pig out And need food every 2 hours again Then I studied for tonight's meeting Very interesting stuff Now I am just tired And just plain ready to pass out Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Wind![]()
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
sorry, I know the feeling, my dog barks like crazy in the morring (her name is Cassie too) and I just tell her to go wake my mom up ![]() [This message has been edited by Wind (11-06-2002 06:21 PM).] |
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Connel![]()
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Well, I liked your poem.. but it seemed to make hardly any sense to me.. Try and make it ryhme.. It sounds more like a small story then a poem.. My advice is. Try and put more meaning into it.. But overall, it is a good poem. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
I'm never kept awake by my animals. LOL! ![]() What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Life is poetry, and poetry life...cats, dogs, some rhyme...some don't. The pleasure of your sharing lifts me. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Yes,little glimpses into other people's lives interest me....I like this. Thanks for sharing.... Sounds like a lot of work, but I'll bet the love back is worth it. ![]() Warm Regards, Pat ![]() ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggsssssss) Oh Julie, I'm sorry you had such a long day, hope you get a good nights sleep tonight to make up for it! (sigh) This is wonderfully told, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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DawnG![]() ![]()
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Julie, I hope you have a better night than last night and a better tomorrow than today. Dawn |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
Sometimes, I must be in outer space. However, ever after reading this poem I feel right at home on the earth. Yeah. Thank you. etoodog |
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