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Alone for now
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Alone for now |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981
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I am alone for now, The house is empty. I stare out the window at the empty streets One glimmering streetlight In semidarkness leaves flutter Expecting a lone dog to wander down the street Or a few drops of rain Or even a bird to stop by my window The wind is so feice tonight, Blowing its hardest. At least, one of them is. I am just sitting here, Alone for now [This message has been edited by Wind (11-06-2002 06:14 PM).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"I stare out the window at the empty streets One glimmering streetlight In semidarkness leaves flutter Expecting a lone dog to wander down the street Or a few drops of rain" I like the feel of this the feel of the moment....  |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Dude... I loved your poem.. It reminds me of when I see other people, boyfriend+Girlfriend.. I dont any girlfriend.. so you see where im going?... But yeah.. your poem triggered my emotions. ( Cries )... lol... Nah, it was a good poem. Good Job! I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Aw, *big hugs* I know that feeling. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
As Balladeer would say: Geesh! I wrote "or even a bird to slop by my window" Not a pleasent sight! Sorry for those of you who read it that way.... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I've had such moments as well. It's a good poetic exercise to write, as you have done, on these little moments in time. Enjoyed your sharing such a moment. EA |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Teehee...just an aside...the most brilliant of us poets have mind faster than fingers syndrome...that's what makes the typos...that's my story and I'm sticking to it. Wonderful write this evening. Emotion and flow were very effective. ThisDiamond |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent show of emotions in this piece. Well done. ~Hugs~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Wind~ This is a heart-tugger. You've expressed these feelings well. Very nicely done. ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi, happy to read your poem. Very lonely imagery. I relate. Sandra |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I defiently know how this feels. That is the way I feel tonight. Great write. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big huggsssssss) Oh Liz, believe me, this is a feeling we all have every once in a while and rest assured that every day has its way and much joy is right ahead for you and never again will you feel this alone! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liz, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
HHmmm providing a link to an old poem really creates publicity..... LoL |
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