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Noah's Arc Again?
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Noah's Arc Again? |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Post iron curtain spirits thrash would there be an easier way into friendlier lands where passports and credentials are feverishly questioned What fate lies on the other side where the grass is just as green? What other glorious means of transport can there be except for something biblical and promising here comes the flood...and we can refer to mankind here comes the Arc which sets out from time to time. The Arc is not just a boat in port, you see passengers board in numbers greater than twos or threes figurative arcs set afloat among the seas of humanity some stay adrift forever searching for reasons... tempted to propel worn causes to antiquity never quite finding the Terra Firma of their dreams. barges of immigrants wave their hands perpetually some dream to continue their lives in cellars others will run off to wheat belt lands of plenty there will be the few who have kept diaries... post iron curtain spirits flash will there ever be an easier way to enter new lands? [This message has been edited by ecrivan (11-08-2002 07:23 PM).] |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A thought provoking write here...images of the man made floods...those we shelter so dearly in the comfort of our heads... I really liked this one. ThisDiamond |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is such a cool poem. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Diamond, Loner, I might have continued on the mental anguish of the immigration process |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
there I added a couple of lines regarding the stress of immigration |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) It is so very hard to tell, but one things for sure, and that is we are not travelling in pairs anymore and that saturates the original concept of how such emergence began! (big huggsssssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, I just love the way you think, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Ericvan, Wow! I enjoyed this poem very much. Dawn |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Martin darling boy This is simply one of the best I’ve seen in a long time. I truly don’t get here enough but there is only so much time in the day. I’m glad I didn’t get to miss this utter beauty it is extremely special the writing is perfect and again you two have written pure gold. Beautiful work really beautiful, You have always been a favourite writer of mine and I really don’t get the chance to tell you often enough that your writing really shines. This is exquisite  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Hi Marsha, Don't get to write as much as I used to..and am always cooking up new material as u can c..thanks for your support  Hi Dawn Thbaks for sharing |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Noah, your thoughts are well appreciated |
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