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Etcetera New Member
since 2002-11-06
Posts 3Maryland |
First and foremost, you laugh at my jokes so you know this means you're as retarded as I am we're working on the same page in the book we are writing together... two of a kind in a once in a lifetime inversation Hearts that are learning to commune like twins separated at birth the language we speak is both ancient and futuristic so anxious am I to tell you what you already know I feel it in your eyes, and hear it in your smile, I taste it when you laugh, and smell it in our silence, I see it in our recent times that are running smoother, and I know it when you leave me without words... I run off at the mouth in silence, yet I silently speak my mind but the funny thing is... you’re understanding me I've known you for centuries yet we've just met your name has been etched in my souls armoire since before we ever spoke So I never tire of writing these love notes for our enjoyment and although I’ll share them for the entire world to see this is still an intimate intellectual inversation between you and me. . . |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Kymela, this is an outstanding first post!!  Welcome to Passions, I am looking forward to reading more of your wonderful work. I hope that you enjoy your time here.If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  Wow!!! Oh my gosh, this is such a wonderfully poignant and beautiful debut, sweet friend, yes, and may this beauty forever beat in you and your loves hearts in harmony, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Kymela, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kymela, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome to Passions! I much enjoyed your first post. Please check your email for a special greeting. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
Nothing retarded at all about this... a speaking of the silent heart to willing ears... a beautiful writing... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Hearts that are learning to commune like twins separated at birth the language we speak is both ancient and futuristic so anxious am I to tell you what you already know I feel it in your eyes, and hear it in your smile, I taste it when you laugh, and smell it in our silence, I see it in our recent times that are running smoother, and I know it when you leave me without words... I run off at the mouth in silence, yet I silently speak my mind but the funny thing is... you’re understanding me I've known you for centuries yet we've just met your name has been etched in my souls armoire since before we ever spoke ====================== This is a very very cool write... wonderful expressions, word play..theme and phrasing... youve defined soulmates found in your witty delcaration of heart here. Excellent work... Welcome to Poetry Land..so nice to meet you.. I will look forward to reading more of your writing...I like your style take care jm No one has ever shown me how to see the world the way I see it now ... |
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Etcetera New Member
since 2002-11-06
Posts 3Maryland |
Thank you all for such wonderful feedback. You will be seeing plenty of me. It has taken me a while to locate a Poetry Forum that has captured my interest so well. The various styles across the board make for a very interesting read. I wrote this poem for my husband who will be joining the forums shortly. This is something we both enjoy doing together and find extremely creative. Poetry for us is truly a wordplay for the mind, heart, & soul. It is an excellent way to capture your partners interest while expressing emotions. Thank you again! ~Till the n... Kymela |
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