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Seasonal Poem |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Autumn is the time of earth, Quiet and friendly brown, Soft somber smiled Tweedy and dead weedy Winter is the snow sometimes Many clothes Many fires Many briskities Summer is the time of Sun High skyed and handsome Bare-chested funny business Spring is the time of love Old snow and new grass A time to wake up and look around A time of sudden beauty |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Autumn is a beautiful time of year. beautiful poem. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
THIS is the Toe... that barely shows... I'm warm in this, my poet-friend... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Toe! This is a wonderful write full of outstanding images. I for one am very pleased I live where there are four seasons... Love this more serious side of you...  ~Morning hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Succinct, descriptive, satisfyingly sufficient. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Fantastic! You don't waste one word. The word you used which I like the most is Tweedy, in Autumn.... that is brilliant.... Enjoyed this much. Thanks, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Toe! You surprised me with this poetic side of you this fine fall day! I love how you couldn't resist that little bit of toerag wit, "Tweedy and dead weedy"--that was so delightfully funny mixed in with words of such import! Mix 'em up and keep us guessin'!!! Who is the real Toe? I'm enjoying trying to figure this one out! Makes life, and you, even more interesting! tehe Linda [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (10-14-2002 10:21 AM).] |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
I love all seasons in their own special way. Today rainy Autumn storms are raging 'round here, but I'm sitting warm next to my woodstove. Love your description of the seasons Toe Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
So...in other words. You're saying Toe is in season year round!  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You know the seasons where I live are hot and wet, hot and dry, suffocatingly hot, and not quite so hot. *G* But this takes my mind to places where fall and spring last longer than a week... and I do so love the visit! *S* The images are beautiful, sweets... with Toe-smiles mixed in for pure delight. *S* I love it! *S* |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, there are blessings in all four seasons and I wish them all to fill your heart with many fond memories every year, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Toerag, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I always liked the Four Seasons but I thought singing "Walk Like a Man" in a falsetto voice was a little strange  |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
I like this other Toe. So tell me, which Toe is it?  ~Sheri |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
such a beautiful poem... but I can't decide who is funnier, you or the Balladeer... M |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Well, well, Mr. Toe.....you really do have a serious side. I like it, too, dear friend. I wasn't surprised, though, to see just a wee bit of humor. This was a very nice poem. There's something I love in all four seasons. Thanks for sharing with us. Love To All, Ethel |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Oh man - Toerag's gone soft (well, when wasn't he?) A nice poem, with no cuts or barbs about that rascally Balladeer. What's next? A sweet poem about lovable kitties? *gag* J/K - Toe - |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*sigh*....this was sooooo beautiful....enjoyed it very much Charisma |
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