Open Poetry #23 |
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Faye Junior Member
since 2002-11-04
Posts 14The world of Dreams&Memories |
We need a reason to hold on To what we have For when we have lost it Nothing is good enough to please us Why are our lives worth having, you ask Life is nothing but one long task A task to prove that your are something But something in nothing is nothing but something A reason to hold on To what we have For when we have lost it Nothing will ever appease us Why would you give up Why stop now For when life ends Thats all you get A reason to hold om To what we have For when we have lost it Where do we lead our lives then? |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I like to think that we lead our lives where our hearts go.... Very nice write. Welcome to Passions! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'm enjoying the way your mind works, Faye...I'll continue to be reading you! |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Faye, this is a very good poem. I loved your play with words in part of it. It was very interesting. Look forward to more of your work. Thanks for sharing. Love makes the world go 'round (unkown) with love and hugs from Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (11-05-2002 03:17 PM).] |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
Nice poems...Great thoughts Hugesss Secretlife, (Easy come,,Easy go)
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (sigh) If the world was nothing but sacrifices, the world shouldn't be turning, so knowing it does rotate there is ambition to everything and logic to it all! (big hugggssssss)n This is a wonderfully thought-provoking poem, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Faye, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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