Open Poetry #23 |
Timed Cliche |
WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
I fear now time standing still for it deemed cliche would then bury me in tedium of critical speech upon speech of rhetoric. So time, that which we measure yet can never grasp. That which causes us to grow old too fast. That which beats out ticks of tock, damn the clock as time need stand still for a moments pause. WhiteRose 11/04/02 "my reflection becomes me" |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Funny how we can't feel the earth rotate yet we all know time is always constantly fleeting and moving and just one caesura can help us all regain our breath! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, this deserves a good bump, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
Time is the motion upon the stationary canvass of eternity. Enjoyed the poem lovely lady! God bless! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Time, the endless wonder of the world......it gives so much and takes. Very well done Rose, this is GREAT! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Anne, time does pass by so quickly, doesn't it??? (except in between times Gary and I are together.) Love makes the world go 'round (unkown) |
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