Open Poetry #23 |
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It Helps To Write When |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA ![]() |
It helps to write when our hearts ache like now, we feel The disappointments coming for different reasons, from circumstances beyond our control Our plans for this weekend together this time cancellation is possible To be together for even short times of happiness to share our love Yes, to write helps when this loneliness for each other grips our hearts Longing to see each other just to be together to enjoy each others company When distance separates us because of situations we've gotten into It helps to write when miles can't be reached through, just to touch our fingertips Still, we both are so very thankful our hearts of love feel no distance Of this, it always helps to write, of our love we will always write |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very sweet Ethel *s...writing helps sort out many things ~smiling M |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (sigh) Oh Ethel, this is sooooooo beautiful and so true, sweet friend, and your love for Gary is so strong and I know he can't wait to read all these gorgeous poems the day you finally are married and never again have to long from distances apart! (kiss on cheek) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Maureen, it sure does. And I really appreciate all the wonderful people here at PIP who try to help us sort out things. Thank you for reading and leaving a reply. Love makes the world go 'round (unkown) |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Noah, thank you so much for your sweet reply. I knew that you would know exactly how I feel. because of you and Joanna loving each other so much and not being able to see each other every day. It really hurts. Gary and I had our hopes all built up to see each other this weekend and now it may not happen. Love makes the world go 'round (unkown) |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Ethel, this is very true. Writing helps to release so many feelings. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Ethel writing is downright theraputic at times. I Can feel the emotions in this. Hugs. |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sue, thanks for reading my poem, and for your reply. I appreciate it. Love makes the world go 'round (unkown) |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Donna, it sure is. Writing helps get out those pent-up feelings that would probably make us explode if they stayed inside us. It feels that way sometimes, anyway. Don't you think? Yeah, I'm feeling the emotions in this poem very much today. In fact. I may just go to the "feelings forum" and try to get some of these feelings out. I don't like to be depressed and down feeling. I've found that we have to help ourselves with the emotions we have at times. Thanks, Donna. Love makes the world go 'round (unkown) |
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