Open Poetry #23 |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace ![]() |
Open each breath you take summons my heart and I try but cannot conceal my emotions for I do not know how to love silently I’m not disappointed, I never expected anything from you. |
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Connel![]()
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Nice... it a little short,.. But the shorter the easier to remember i guess. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
for I do not know how to love silently ________________ Beautiful words here Helen! Much enjoyed the read. ~Hugs~ |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) Awwwwwwww, I just love this, sweet friend, may your love make music like the doves and flit liely like the hummingbirds! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
I imagine this silence as an expression of a wild beating passion, or a simple talk alone. Anyway, your words ring clear. Thank you. etoodog |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
one I love silently...but it's hard. |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Helen, as I guess everyone that's read my poems can tell, I, too, cannot "love silently". Thanks for sharing. I like it. Love makes the world go 'round (unkown) |
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Faye Junior Member
since 2002-11-04
Posts 14The world of Dreams&Memories |
Love is audicious... It reminds me of Sense and Sensebillity... Or maybe I just read too much. "Love with your being; not just your heart." |
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