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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia 
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Lest a fragile heart not break Or think it ever true For loneliness and often hurt Can start the search for new Who knows the thoughts of inner? We guess to what is true Who shows true truth in action? I think but just a few |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I think I'm liking your short and to the point poems! |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Like I said at your other poem, short, but good... Keep it up.. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
There is much ~truth~ in this poem. I too, am enjoying your short poems. You write them quite well, and cause me to think! Warm Regards, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Sunshine, thank you for the reply, I will keep writing and hope you will keep liking. Connel, again thank you for the reply, I will keep working with the words and hope you keep reading. regards2you, Dear Pat, thanks for the reply, I also enjoy your work, I hope I can keep making you think for a long time to come. Sincerely Rick |
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