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Southern Breeze |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Southern Breeze Gentle winds of soft embrace Calmly touch my tanning face And clouds drift by above my head In gold and pink and violet red The sea is calm and smooth in roll It’s blue and green to please a soul And mist leaves drops of crystal flare Upon the armrest of my chair My mind rides phantoms of a wile Amidst the palms of tropic Isles Where suds of water bath my feet And sands massage me in a treat. Where girls with flowers in their hair Dance the hula to drumming flare And I wade in, in consuetude To dance with then in semi nude It’s then a hand in innocent pry Wakes me shakes me, you’re missing it Sy. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Seymour, I'm so happy you're back, sweet friend, I have issed your wonderful words this past week and you come back with a luau of delight! (big huggsssssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, I could envision the palm trees rattling reading this, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Welcome home, Mr. Seymour. It's SOOOO GOOD TO SEE YOU !!!!!! I like the way you painted this picture of Hawaii's beaches, the water and the hula dancers this morning. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Love makes the world go 'round (unkown) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
dancing semi-nude huh??? shame on you, putting that picture in my head so early in the morning. hugss  M |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Where girls with flowers in their hair Dance the hula to drumming flare And I wade in, in consuetude To dance with then in semi nude It's then a hand in innocent pry Wakes me shakes me, you're missing it Sy. ======================== Oh man...they woke Randy up just when the dream was getting good. LOL I see you had a great time on your trip...and that tan looks real good on you and your muse *S* Welcome back Stinky..sure have missed you..mornings just arent the same with out my daily dose of Sy-sighs Has Isabel got all the traveling out of her system for a while?? lol *winkiewinkie*   Unknown to us, there are moments when crevices open for time to come alive with begining. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah what a lovely dream...or was it just a dream? So good to have you back all tanned up and lookin' good! Much enjoyed the read this morning love. ~Morning hugs~ ~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The soft drumming did you in and soft sleep was capturing the mood and groove of soft hip's sway... ah well, it's now another day... Smiling here... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Glad to be back, missed you all. Thanks for the read and kind words. garysgirl Soooo glad to be back, had a good time but missed my friends. Maureen, Would you prefer it late at night? LOL JM, Isabel will never get enough travel. My traveling is mostly in an esthetic sense. I missed you Tink and read your poem last night. Won't repeat what I said but it is an epopee. Randy and I send. Enchantress Nice to be back to your mornings hugs. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Your sun shined for seven days, thank you. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Welcome back Sy...you were missed here...glad to read you again ...believe what your heart feels... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Welcome back, Mr. T!!! We have all missed our daily shot in the arm of your charm, wit and wisdom! Your poem has enabled me to picture you basking at the oceanside, taking it all in--and sleeping it all off!--I jest! tehe EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow Sy, this is a very good one, I love it! I love the way you do the last two lines. Nice. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio Thank you and I'm glad to be back. Earth Angel Thank you sweet glad i'm back. passing shadows Thanks for the read and comment. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Aha...James |
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