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utopia New Member
since 2002-11-01
Posts 2 |
from sun up to sun down i think of you wondering if you think of me too but i know the answer you don't because i still love but you never really did just imagine you in love wow god forbid *if you give me a smile right now...i'll give you the whole damn world* |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome write Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sounds like he doesn't realize what he is missing! Earth Angel |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Good poem. I enjoyed. Thanks for sharing. Love makes the world go 'round (unkown) |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
utopia, This sounds just like a situation I wrote about a while back. I know the feeling well. Hope he can see what he is missing out on soon. I enjoyed your write very much.  A belated welcome to Passions as well. Dawn |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This was great... especially loved the last line. Maree  |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
I usually imitate music in my replies but, for you a hug is all I could find. Thank you. etoodog |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
utopia Enjoyed the read. |
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