navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #23 » still
Open Poetry #23
Post A Reply Post New Topic still Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
utopia
New Member
since 2002-11-01
Posts 2


0 posted 2002-11-03 09:51 PM


from sun up
to sun down

i think of you
wondering if you think of me too

but i know the answer
you don't

because i still love
but you never really did

just imagine
you in love
wow god forbid

*if you give me a smile right now...i'll give you the whole damn world*

© Copyright 2002 utopia - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-11-03 10:02 PM


Awesome write

Cold hands means a warm heart

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2002-11-03 10:46 PM


Sounds like he doesn't realize what he is missing!

Earth Angel

garysgirl
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
3 posted 2002-11-03 11:10 PM


Good poem. I enjoyed.
Thanks for sharing.

Love makes the world go 'round (unkown)
with love and hugs from Ethel
                  

DawnG
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Senior Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494
United States
4 posted 2002-11-03 11:18 PM


utopia,

This sounds just like a situation I wrote about a while back. I know the feeling well. Hope he can see what he is missing out on soon. I enjoyed your write very much.

A belated welcome to Passions as well.

                               Dawn

Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

5 posted 2002-12-03 01:33 AM


This was great... especially loved the last line.

Maree

Robert Adamson
Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328
PA/USA
6 posted 2002-12-03 09:24 AM


I usually imitate music in my replies but, for you a hug is all I could find. Thank you.

etoodog

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
7 posted 2002-12-03 09:36 AM


utopia
Enjoyed the read.

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #23 » still

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary