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Remembering |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown 
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~ By Sue ~ Will you love me tomorrow When the sun doesn’t shine Will you always hold me close Just to ease my worried mind Will you be there when I need you To help me through the night If only for a little while Will you take away my fright These fears I have they feel so real Whenever you are not here It’s hard for me to sleep at night When I don’t feel you near The nights are so long and lonely I lay awake and think of you Remembering how it use to be When our love was still brand new 11-3-02 |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I love this poem. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Remembering the good times can be so bittersweet. ~ warm hugs to you, sweet Sue Linda |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Sue, I enjoyed this poem a lot. Hope you are feeling better. Dawn |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Sue, my heart goes out to you, I hope soon you find the true happiness you deserve as I hope he too will find a way back up again! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet firned, I send angel hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sue, this is a beautifully written poem, yet so sad. It's really hard to let go sometimes, Isn't it? Oh, if only things could get back like they were when you first met, huh? I hope that whatever you truly want is what will happen. Love makes the world go 'round (unkown) |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
nice reminisce Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
the_loner_23 Thank you! Earth Angel Linda, yes they can be. I don’t think about the good times very often, I guess because there are too many bad times. But, when I do it still causes some pain. Thank you for your warm hugs! They are much needed right now. DawnG Thank you! I am glad you liked it. I am feeling a little better. Mistletoe Angel Noah, thank you for your kind comments, and your angel hugs. You are so sweet. garysgirl Ethel, yes it is real hard to let go. But, it is getting easier. Especially, when he acts like a jerk. All of the bad would have to be erased, if things were to be like they were when we first met. And, I don’t think that could happen. Thank you for your love and hugs. They are much needed right now. All I want to do, now, is get away from him. He has had too many chances and blew them all. Kethry Thank you! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sue, he isn't blowing chances..he has chosen a different life to live..and he has to be the one to change that..but I, as you know have a pessimistic outlook on that of my own. hugs M |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
The dark parts of the night can be long and desperate...Thank God for the light of the rising sun...powerful emotions expressed in this write. ...believe what your heart feels... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
that's scary...I know. |
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