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Forgive My Heart For Loving You
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Forgive My Heart For Loving You |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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Girl I came home early, You thought I was workin, two glasses on the table cigarettes still burnin, I heard the back door slam, footsteps on the run Your hair was a mess Ya had buttons undone Chorus: Well I just came home to say good bye and tell you this fool ain't so blind I got a new place to stay today Got the cable hooked up and my rent is paid Gonna watch old movies where love was true and forgive my heart for loving you. You put up a front, But I read your face, One look in your eyes sent the truth my way I could smell cologne The kind I don't use You turned way from me but you knew I knew Chorus: Girl I just came home to say good bye and tell you this fool ain't so blind I got a new place to stay today Got the cable hooked up and my rent is paid Gonna watch old movies where love was true and forgive my heart for loving you. Celtrue/2002 The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I've never heard it said that way... but why not? Forgiveness has to start somewhere.... very cool, Ethome...very good! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Gonna watch old movies where love was true and forgive my heart for loving you. ==================================== Classic E-babers blues.... where have ya been boyeeeeee???  So good to read your lyric and verse poet pal... hope all is well up your way  Unknown to us, there are moments when crevices open for time to come alive with begining. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Outstanding lyrics! ET, glad you called home to share this one. But I hope it isn't a personal flat note. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
It does sound like a song...thanks for sharing E...I probably have so many songs in me..but I have a terrible voice. M |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Ethome, this is a perfectly beautiful, yet sad, love song. Hope it's just from "observation" and not "participation". Thanks for sharing with us. ~With Love And Hugs! Ethel |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHome~ Absolutely WONDERFUL ! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Very estute in the declaration... You are very good. ThisDiamond |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Eric...good to see you in here singing your sad song...love that line "forgive my heart for loving you"..original and catchy...just like you! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ethome - I would love to live closer to you and your music. What a jamming time we would have... As a matter of fact I've been taping all morning... BC |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Eric, this sounds so very sad, sweet friend, this is a beautiful song and I hope everything is alright! (sigh) I would love to see you and Bill do music together too, yay, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (11-02-2002 02:49 PM).] |
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