Open Poetry #23 |
Almost There |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Almost There I'm almost there, I feel it more the calm that whispers, waiting for. I leave for you a note each day, a tiny snack to fill your stay. I'm almost there, inside I know it won't be long, reflections show. There's room within, this windows time, wasted not, the want in rhyme. I'm almost there, in need of you, prepared for change, a dance of new. Embossed, the feel, the rainbows end in random thoughts, to you, I send. Each day I'm yours, in words on blue... I'm almost there, in want of you. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Maureen darling heart there is no one who can build a piece with the ease of you, how I wish I could write this well and know that I never will. Truly exquisite writing darling heart I love it utterly utterly Love and warm stuff as always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Maureen, these words are almost haunting. This would make a wonderful song...I can almost hear it.. Great work |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Marsha..I am just preparing myself for what may come..*s thank you Dear one... ooops that title belongs to you doesn't it, Deer one It is so great having met you...it makes understanding your poetry that much better. Hey and LongJohn calls me Mo..I keep telling him I am Maurine..I mean Maureen..see pretty soon I won't know how to spell my own name. laughing~ M oh I forgot to thank you a song? well it won't be sung by me. [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (11-01-2002 09:04 PM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Maureen, thanks for sharing your heart in this beautiful poem.... "Each day I'm yours, in words on blue... I'm almost there, in want of you" I especially like the last part. Love to All, Ethel |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
This is just beautiful Maureen. It's...well... it's....just beautiful!!! Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Awwwwwwwww, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, and may your loved ones always be there for you as they are right near you all the time just as we all so lucky to be your friend! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Friends are here M when ever, how ever, and for what ever... anytime just reach........ Preparing will help thanks for sharing. Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Beautiful, sad and haunting, Maureen... and we are always here for you ~ loving chipmunk hugs Lyra |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a beautiful poem. |
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