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Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

0 posted 2002-10-31 08:23 PM

Float Me

I have been
the flotsam
of a sunken bark
on a sea gone calm

You
the jetsam
of a drunken captain
gone mad

Together now
we float
on the salty waves
and in the tides
of our desires

©103102

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2002-10-31 08:57 PM

Unique use of the words "flotsam" and "jetsam".

~ May you enjoy the swells and the troughs; the tidal ins and the outs---the ebbs and the flows of your sea of love!

Earth Angel

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

2 posted 2002-10-31 10:58 PM

I enjoyed the pictures you painted in this one. Well done.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

3 posted 2002-11-01 12:14 PM

beautiful sir just beautiful...you are so talented...helen

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2002-11-01 07:53 PM

Enjoyed the floating ride, the imagery.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-11-01 11:39 PM

(sigh) Awwwwwwww, this is lovely, sweet friend, and may you and your love forever be castaways in the heavens of your hearts where true joys of life reside! (smiles) This is a treasure of a read, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet E.J, thank you for sharing!