Open Poetry #23 |
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Past Languid Days |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Languid days long past longing, far into new desire. Sailing upon the seas of my heart...let out your sails, let the wind carry you to places never seen before. Keep the remembrance of languid days, idle hours when we met heart to heart. Before we set sail together for our new destination away from the shores of love. Always remembering languid days long gone...past daliances. And, most of all, remembering when our hearts rested ~~~~only in each other. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
For some reason this made me think of Iseult and Tristram - do you know that old tale?? ![]() |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Ivy Rose - nice delicate write. I almost felt I was in the south pacific for some reason... BC |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Well I am Bill heh ![]() ![]() |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Ivy, I could feel myself floating along on the ocean in a sailboat. I loved the imagery that came through from this. Nice job. Hugs, Marti Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You have some wonderful memories to keep you warm even through any of life's chilling drafts that may come your way from time to time. Beautifully written. Earth Angel |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (sigh) This is sooooooo beautifully bittersweet and had me feeling like I was sailing along too on a yachy, yay! (kiss on cheek) Always cherish those special memories and despite the cold winds that may come may many more happy days always fill your heart eternally, this is delightful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Ivy, this is beautiful. Sorry I missed it before. Love To All, Ethel |
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DawnG![]() ![]()
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Oh the days long forgotten. Sometimes we forget the best days of life just because nothing exciting happens in them. The best days are always the lazy days spent with friends and family. Enjoyed bunches. Dawn |
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