Open Poetry #23 |
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October Noon |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart ![]() |
![]() October Noon Ah the riotous winds in action on this late October noon, rustling leaves still cling in trees still dangling on, but soon to leave, and pardon the pun as the leaves dance in the sun, the rustle is loud upon the street, a sonata of sound, can’t be beat. Blow wind blow, leaves circling as an invisible hand is thus stirring the dried surplus of summer’s day, all the colors have come in play. Hang on a bit tighter, all fall leaves for one more weekend I need reprieve of office walls that bide my soul 'til I walk in majesty, come again whole. 29 October, 1999 Revised 31 October 2002 ©KRJ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (10-31-2002 02:09 PM).] |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ I found that I rather liked this~ Especially this - 'Blow wind blow, leaves circling as an invisible hand is thus stirring the dried surplus of summer’s day, all the colors have come in play.' Happy HowlieWeiners to ya' *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
fascinating...yeah, save a few autumn leaves from slumbering crumble, need some for Thanksgiving harvest, right!?! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
The end of summer comes way too soon, doesn't it, Karilea? I like this plea for just one more day. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh so lovely Karilea.. The leaves here have barely started to turn.. late this year in changing.. perhaps so we can hold onto thoughts of summer a little longer.... yes, perhaps. ~Hugs sweet poetess~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Moonlight Romeo![]() ![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
The snow begins to fly, and above the roofs, the smoke begins to billow. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Blow wind blow, leaves circling as an invisible hand is thus stirring the dried surplus of summer’s day, all the colors have come in play. a lovely read, enjoyed. The ladders of life that we scale merrily Move mysteriously around So that when you think you're climbing up, man In fact you're climbing down-Nick ca |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
I'm hoping for another colorful weekend myself....just one more. Enjoyed |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Karilea... you have captured my thoughts perfectly here... Autumn has been late in arriving this year, and I was really sure that because of the hot dry summer, we would have a bleak show of color... but I have been most pleasantly surprised and Kalamazoo... is only now, at peak... probably a couple of weeks late, but the long slow autumn, has afforded us more opportunity to view the beauty... Your poem is such a perfect description... ![]() Lyra |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Karilea...I think the leaves will wait for you...just don't put off that walk in majesty too long... ...believe what your heart feels... |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea This is lovely...and the leaves are just changing here...I love autumn for so many reasons, one of them is the poems like this one. |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed ![]() |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Karilea this is just beautiful. I love the season of autumn, when all the leaves start turning colors. |
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