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WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
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0 posted 2002-10-30 02:26 PM



Here reflected
shimmering like sunshine
are words of love,
split by light
then transformed into colors.

The shades of emotion
that escape my heart.

Flashes in hues of blue,
splashes of red on page
flaunt of yellow, slash of sienna
bold black to speak of rage.

Placed with rainbow effect
not in any way perfect
but the wording of my life
in a color filled array
words that paint pictures
in tone I have my say.

So read with eyes wide open
sense color, emotional wheel
turning with the surreal force
it's my world and how I feel.

WhiteRose 10/30/02

© Copyright 2002 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
1 posted 2002-10-30 03:02 PM


They say pictures paint a thousand words, well your words just painted a thousand pictures!

Very poetic

EA

Radrook
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since 2002-08-09
Posts 648

2 posted 2002-10-30 03:41 PM


Wow!

Let me say it again!

Wow!

Enjoyed this wonderful poem!
Keep up the excellent work!

God bless!


Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
3 posted 2002-10-30 03:58 PM


Hello Anne

Thank you for allowing us to see inside your heart, where your words so obviously come from.  You have painted such a beautiful picture.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
4 posted 2002-10-30 04:03 PM


Well put. Appreciate that you share all these colors with us. ThisDiamond
garysgirl
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5 posted 2002-10-30 04:06 PM


Anne, as with everyone else, you painted
a beautiful picture in my "mind's eye", too.
Thanks for sharing with us, Anne.
Love To All,
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (10-30-2002 04:07 PM).]

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon
6 posted 2002-10-30 04:39 PM


Linda, as always, your comments mean so much.

Radrook, wow, really, wow, thanks so much.

Hi Sue, thanks for reading and responding. Your comments are appreciated.

TD, thanks for reading and responding.

Ethel, thanks dear one for reading and for taking the time to respond.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
7 posted 2002-12-27 02:28 AM


long time ago...but I'm glad I went back....hope you are well.
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