Open Poetry #23 |
untitled in blue |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
No music to calm the thoughts of before or the needs that shall follow wanting more Some things I need to rid myself of and others to gain to partake rise above A rambling of sorts on this reign of a day where the sun's shine is hidden behind clouds to stay And my body is tight with its worries that fill immobiled, I am, as I sit reading still the words of my past, of passions in hold treasured in save, rhyming records once told It is I being masked and an I naked too when untitled I am, in these words colored blue. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I love this poem Cold hands means a warm heart |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you Julie... ~smiling M |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I feel compelled to repeat two of your clever, and moving, stanzas... "A rambling of sorts on this reign of a day where the sun's shine is hidden behind clouds to stay..." and "It is I being masked and an I naked too when untitled I am, in these words colored blue." Thanks for sharing you! EA |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you so much for sharing your heart through your poems. You are a very talented lady. I love to read your poetry. Love To All, Ethel |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Darn after reading this thinking about what other color besides blue, that I could give you... Enjoyed Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write Maureen. I know this feeling well. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Earth Angel I am glad you chose those two sets...I liked they way they fit in too..aren't we all at times a bit masked when on here ? Thank you M Ethel...Thank you for enjoying my words. The only talent I have is that of my life and how it controls my words and thoughts. Bernie, you give me a rainbow of thoughts each time you respond..Thank you for that. ~smiling M Nancy, thanks it's just a blue here today, but there is a rainbow behind it all. |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
M...."colored blue" reminds me of: "A deep beyond all color, beyond all sounding too, the ocean's true alluring, for want of better.... blue." Thank you for sharing. Gently done. Bob |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wonderful poem, Maureen. Hugs Sandra |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Sometimes the best way to see where we are going is to review where we have been. Always enjoy your inspiration and pure gift of light. ThisDiamond |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
"A rambling of sorts on this reign of a day where the sun's shine is hidden behind clouds to stay..." Maureen, I love the play on words in this, so elegantly done Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big huggsssssss) Oh Maureen, I'm sorry to hear you're feeling blue today, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and know that the sun is always shining behind the clouds and a rainbow will come smiling out very soon! (sigh) I send angel hugs your way, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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