Open Poetry #23 |
Smart (A poem on self esteem) |
Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
They say I'm dumb. They don't know what they're talking about. I'm Smart They say I will amount to nothing. I don't need to. I'm already something. They say I am dumber than a sack of potatos. Those sure are smart potatos! (This isn't true) [This message has been edited by Wind (10-13-2002 02:33 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
If all the world were but stones that would be cast upon me. If all it were but angry tones that caused a sadness to be. I'd simply shrug and walk alone on this path where I'll be ME! Nicely done...good to see ya at Passions. You're right, this is not true... |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I like it. Nicely done Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Yes, don't pay attention to them, you are a very bright and special person and we all love you so much and am so proud of you! (sigh) This is poignant, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liz, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (10-13-2002 04:36 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
No, I'm sure it isn't true, but by putting ourselves in other people's shoes, we learn compassion and understanding. You did this in a simple and straightforward way. Very effective writing! Earth Angel |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Hey guys don't take this one literaly, it's just because I want people to know that you should'nt listen to other people when they put you down, OK? Thanks |
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