Open Poetry #23 |
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Few pages of a booklet I'm making |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands ![]() |
I'm making a booklet with the pics I took in USA and little rhymes, here are some examples ![]() They seem to float in little groups Keeping balance on elephant's feet They soak in water, fill their veins Beneath the surface, roots will meet ![]() They sing their songs on electric cords And sit like written notes in air I can't read notes, but I just knew That these birds really didn't care ![]() "I'll see you later" said the sun Behind high clouds he faded light I saw him again on Schiphol Airport Because while flying I skipped a night Like scattered leaves...my words will flow [This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (10-29-2002 07:45 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
beautiful Titia...I am working on a shadow box..but I need to finish the door to it before I take a picture and post the poem to go with it..I am a little behind, but I have been working on it...so that all my memories will be hanging on the wall in front of me daily to see and think fondly of. hugsssss M [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (10-29-2002 07:55 PM).] |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Titia, these are fantastic. I can't wait to see more. ![]() I have no idea what those things floating on the water are, but they are certainly fascinating. Hugs, Marti Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Hi Maureen, when do we get to see the pics you took in Tampa??? I'm so curious. Marti, LOL those are cypress trees, they grow like that. When the water would disappear, you could see that they 'stand' on their roots. Like scattered leaves...my words will flow [This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (10-30-2002 02:13 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (sigh) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it!!! (kiss on cheek) I love mangrove trees and banyun trees because they are so magical to me and the birds they leave nests for, these pictures and words are precious, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Titia, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Titia darling heart this is wonderful, just what I needed today, the touch of sunlight on my face is enough to ease the heaviness of my heart, do I love this you know I do YOU are a very very special writer. A true mix of sunlight and laughter I love it utterly utterly, beautifully written. My epic poem is on its way but I warm you darling heart it is long, very very long, but it should make everyone smile in remembrance. ![]() ![]() ![]() Love and warm stuff As always Mushy ![]() ![]() Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
What a lovely way to remember your trip, Titia... and we will never forget you either ![]() Lyra |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Titia, these are great! The pictures are good and your verses are just perfect. That is going to be a fantastic book. I want one!!!!!!!!! ![]() |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love it, just love this one! Keep sharing! |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
You've captured my imagination and wish you much success with that booklet. Thank you. etoodog |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Titia...nice write...bet the book will be great...(I hope Balladeer was standing under all those birds) |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I enjoyed this very much, Titia... can't wait to see/read more! *S* |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Now this is what I call a travelogue! I love your poems and your photos! Linda |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
There you go, our talented Titia...this will be a wonderful keepsake! |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Titia, this is beautiful...the verses..the pictures....the wonderful memories behind each. Thanks for sharing. Love to All, Ethel |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
HiLovelyLady~ Beautiful photos ... wonderful verse ... (check your e-mail) ![]() Give Muys a *hug* for me~ ![]() Truly can't wait to see more of this booklet~ Nobody ... but NOBODY takes better photos than you sweetie~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Looks like you're going to have to publish soon, I want a book as well. Beautiful pictures and matching poems Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Titia Love looking at these photo memories and poems to go with them. Well captured moments! |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed ![]() |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Oh wow Titia, this is beautiful. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, Titia! You'll have memories to last a lifetime and beyond! |
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