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The Storm
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The Storm |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981
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Liquid glass strikes the ground and shatters Willingly dies, to be reborn A puddle on a ground. The storm is feirce. And then- There is silence |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Very intense messages you portray in so few words. Love the write.  Dawn |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Wow, this is powerful, sweet friend, I love it, you brew such a powerful storm in your words, I love the transition here, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liz, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
This is wonderful.... Hugs, Marti Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A storm can build that suddenly, be that shattering, and be gone before the next breath. I'm liking your work! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This poem is what the month of March can sometimes be like---in like a lion and out like a lamb. Very unique style of writing---and very interesting reading! Earth Angel |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
very nice, Wind A great litle snapshot ~wranx In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward". |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You depict a storm nicely, wind - The silence afterwards is a true experience, isn't it?... Nicely said.. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful imagery you've portrayed here Wind ... very much enjoyed the visual of "liquid glass". Well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Wind~ You've written the storm beautifully, and I do love the calm 'after' the storm. Very nicely done. ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome write Cold hands means a warm heart |
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