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Open Poetry #23

Nothing in between

bslicker

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since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

0 posted 2002-10-29 05:12 PM

Nothing in between

There is/was
a poem
not just any
poem
but a poem
stuck
between us
wondering
if the reader
will move to put
us
next to each
other
side by side
on top
or bottom
don't matter
but next
to each other
only to
break
silence
once again.

Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

[This message has been edited by bslicker (10-29-2002 09:11 PM).]

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-10-29 05:13 PM

Awesome write

Cold hands means a warm heart

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-10-29 09:02 PM

Bernie, a good poem. Thanks for sharing.

Love To All,
Ethel

bslicker

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since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

3 posted 2002-10-29 09:10 PM

the_loner

thanks,,, only write what i feel when i write it.

garysgirl.

thank you for reading,, your so kind.....

Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2002-10-29 09:15 PM

I was wondering the same thing..about your positioning

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2002-10-31 01:40 AM

wow, I love it! Very romantic piece I think.

bslicker

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since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

6 posted 2002-10-31 07:04 AM

nakdthoughts

thank you for reading... and i used to wonder....

Bernie

passing shadows
thank you for reading, and yes that messages is in there.

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2002-10-31 02:14 PM

enjoyed

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2002-12-27 02:17 AM

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