Open Poetry #23 |
LongJohn, A Story Of Life And Death |
Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
It was in late September When LongJohn was conceived It was a chilly evening In 1943. "Twins" the doctor said, And then just nine months later His mother's water broke, She was finally in labor. Sever long hours later The twins were finally born His mother was ecstatic Tired, sore and worn. The twins were not identical, A baby and fecies, The baby died, LongJohn survived, The epitome of his species! [This message has been edited by Toerag (10-29-2002 04:26 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
LMBO Man I love all these poems. It is too funny. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
and Toerag is my twin! |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
You two are too much. Much needed laughter |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Read it again, sailor... your bifocals must be slipping. LOL Toe is very much alive... and right on target! LOL But you two certainly could be brothers... Toe being the handsome, debonair, kind and compassionate one, of course. *G* Though whoever had to raise you would be quietly whispering to aliens in the asylum... or cackling with laughter remembering your antics! LOL |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Mr. Toe, I sure am glad that you didn't mention borrowing LongJohn's boat....somebody might have wanted to use "Ethel" in it, too....or is it a sail boat?? Do Sail boats have a motor, LongJohn??HeeHee!!! Thanks for your story of his birth. Love And Laughter To All, Ethel |
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HollyDazed New Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 6 |
yuuuuucckkkkkk |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Toe!!! This is really SH&%^# of you! PeeYOUUUU! Cor |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
naughty! Lyra |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Great write, Toe! I always knew there was something smelly about that sailor! I've always liked you the best! |
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Tammy Blessing Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 366PA |
Hey Toe this poem really STINKS!! LOL |
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