Open Poetry #23 |
Lemme try this again, 2nd post. |
diphycue New Member
since 2002-10-28
Posts 8Rolla, Missouri, USA |
First off, thank you so much for the positive feedback! Secondly, I need to express that in my last poem my reference to popping pills was meaning my prescription medications. Thanks! Down with dope, up with hope! Ok...here goes another outpouring. It might be a little chaotic, I'm sorta whirlgigging today. <html><body> </body></html> I'd rather have a bottle in front of me than a frontal lobotomy. |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
Jesse, Once again, the raw emotion here puts a lump in my throat and pain in my heart. The jaggedness of your poetry tears at me. Good job. "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Now stop that!... Let's just agree that you have a gift...no revisions needed! Not my final word... Very well done. Encore! ThisDiamond |
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