Open Poetry #23 |
When I think of you |
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
When I think of you . . . A kiss hovers near the warmth of my lips, Your breath dissolves my languid sigh, Your finger brushes a coming tear, And yesterday’s pleasure fills my eye Elizabeth Santos 10?29/02 |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Awww, Liz, this is just so touching. You write the most beautiful pieces. Hugs, Marti Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, I have felt that way. Exquisite write. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OH Liz! I love this! You have an amazing way with words. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Nodding... yes... *S* Thank God for imaginations and memories... this is beautiful! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I think I will have a nap and see if I can conjure something like this up nice one Lizzie. |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
This was very good for me to hear. Thank you. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thank you all, Sharon, I've never known you to need a nap to conjure up anything I appreciated all of the comments THank you Liz |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
liz, beautiful write!! lovely way of expressing a memory...you made me smile. thank you! take care amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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~K Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 104 |
(sigh) I love the short but exquisite! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it!!! (kiss on cheek) And may loves smile always gather the teardrops from your cheeks and light your heart with glee like a childs, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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