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liquid through air v/s air through liquid: tear v/s bubble
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liquid through air v/s air through liquid: tear v/s bubble |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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tear and bubble two naughty imps escape their wells wetting surface like dew drops in early winter while the bubble in its short life travels upwards tear moves downwards in slow motion mostly taking spirits with them seems like any reason is good gravity is just one of them dropping like rain pointing finger at emotions: mostly at pain less so at joy rarely at guilt sometimes at pride liquid . air . through . air . liquid [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (10-29-2002 10:50 AM).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sudhir beloved one, for a long time now my ears have been covered by the drought of no words from you, It is so good to hear you again. Your words are as refreshing rain upon my heart. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
tear move downwards in slow motion mostly taking spirits with them Yes I have also missed your poetry and lines like this WEll done, my friend Liz |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sudhir, I too have missed your words. This piece is wonderful.. and I love the presentation. Much enjoyed. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
O Kethry, thanks a lot, my dear friend... O Liz, my dear friend, thank you very much Nancy, sorry to be away, my dear friend, just had to be away... and I am glad to be here... Thanks to all those who come by ... I have missed being here... Regards to all, Sudhir |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay!!! Oh Sudhir, I'm so happy you're back, sweet friend, you have been missed by us all so much! (big hugggsssssss) The beauty of gravity and helium fills your words, sweet friend, this flows and makes waves of poetic inspiration, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sudhir, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sudhir, this is beautiful. I could see the bubble rise up, as the tear fell down. Thanks for sharing and I hope to see more of your works here. Love To All, Ethel |
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cateash New Member
since 2002-10-30
Posts 6 |
Fabulous, the last part was so creative and just finished the poem off perfectly. You're a great poet with a wonderful style, fresh and different. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
fascinating imaging, this had to have a repeat read before I could pull away to respond...I too love the section about the tear takiing the spirit downward with it, so great to find you here this morning! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I love this one, Sudhir. The words fell gently upon my eyes, as if they were drops of liquid air. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Noah, you are so generous with your words... thanks a lot... Ethel (garsygirl), glad you could see it... thanks a lot for coming by... cateash, what we see is what is mostly creative... depends how much and when we see... thanks a lot... Virginia, feels so good to see you on this thread... thanks... Midnitesun, thanks a lot for your response... regards at all, sudhir |
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