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Chances Are
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Chances Are I don't want to break with her but I also don't want her to treat me this way. I'm digging in but I'm just barely holding on day after torturous day. Not sure where to begin to settle this humbling experience I'm in? I don't want this to be over but there's no way this can go on. I suppose that she will become so frustrated with me that she will eventually go ahead and set me free. That will be a good time to move on. When all my choices are exhausted and all my chances have come and gone. JamesLee Oct29 2002 |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
James, any time is a good time to move on when your heart tells you it is right. Good poem Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh James, yes, whenever your heart tells you move on, for you don't deserve to bear that pain in your heart for so long as you are do deserving of clarity and true happiness! (sigh) My thoughts are with you, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!  May love an light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
To those who are described by this poem I would say: Careful partner! Time is unforgiving and limited. Because of that it is a precious commodity not to be squandered. Each day that passes is a gem never to be retrieved. Each day that passes we are not the same person physically as we were the day before. Gradually and almost imperceptibly, the APPROPRIATE time to make your move runs out. The longer you wait the less options you will have in terms of choices to restart your life successfully. Enjoyed the read! God bless! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
*Nodding and agreeing with Radrook here* Good thoughts to ponder James. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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