Teen Poetry #6 |
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foreverwithyou Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 204Wonderland |
this is a very sensetive subject ppl sry if this was too sensetive but anywayz... _______________________________________________ How can you do this? Why hurt your body? Look beyond yourself. Some think it's funny. That wouldn't be me. What is so funny about marijuana and LSD? Answer these questions, Then maybe you'll see; You're not only hurting youself, You're also hurting me. "I am who I am who I am who am I?" |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
OOO..Cathy I really am sorry about that..I know how much it upsets you about that..I hope things get better.. *Allison* "Sorry I`m not home right now. I`m walkin in the spiderwebs so leave a message and I`ll call you back." |
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dinky Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 258 |
omg!!! this was sooooooo good and it rhymed!!!! cat boxes!!!!(used in the term meaning this was fantastico!!) i cant believe it !! 2 sensitive?!? it was awesome! private library time!! o yea! anywayz this really showed ur feelings and i am always there to talk!! (lol) but really u can talk to me whenever u need to!(i didnt know what smiley to use so i have always wanted to use this one) ~samantha~ "sometimes i just feel like |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
That thing and that one guything with those things make me sad. I like the ending about how it's not only hurting him, but hurting you too. Now I'm all sad. I hope all that is clearing up. (i haven't heard about it lately, so I think and hope that it is) Very good poem though. I think Sam's brain is maturing, because she too, realized that your poem rhymed. (lol, j/j) I like it... you expressed what you felt welly. (well-ly.. is that a word?) lol, ttyl! ~sara |
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rxyfxy04 Member
since 2002-11-26
Posts 54lil' town in Virginia |
i really like this and can relate to it sooo much.. in fact i have a friend that just does not understand what drugs do to him and this is exactly what iv been tryin to say to him.. would you mind if i showed this to him? with your name on it of course, maybe this will help him realize what iv been tryin to say ... ya know? please let me know.. GREAT poem!!! RxyFxy04 |
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foreverwithyou Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 204Wonderland |
of course u can show this to him i think that everyone should no whut drugz can do to u!!!! thankz all of u!!!! ###CATHY### "I am who I am who I am who am I?" |
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