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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
HI all, So sorry if the title is miss-spelled, but I kinda suck at spelling (Most) words in english. The words in ( CAPS ) are background vocals...It's the same genre as "Jagged Edge & Boys II Men", that kind of stuff... Best Wishes, Brian. "Built Courage" (10/12/02) © 2002 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved Verse 1 My eyes wet 'em self As I pack my stuff and leave, Knowing it's all my fault You've withdrawed your love for me. My heart lose selfcontrol Watching you crack up inside, Closing the door behind me Was like getting told you'd died... Refrain Built courage and I told, You said you felt so sold, It's understandable. That we're not saveable, Why we're impossible... Built courage and I told And that's the reason why I'm leaving. To spare you for the pain you're feeling. Everytime you see me Verse Though we were doing fine I was missing some action So I found another Pure physical attraction Forgot all about you Sitting at home all alone How was I to explain Got terrorfied to the bone Refrain Bridge Made a mistake can't correct it, ( now it's goodbye ). And I should have detected ( brought too much sigh ). That it would ruin our plan...I'm so sorry, so sorry. Should never have covered it up, ( Now it's goodbye ). I should have bothered to stop ( Brought too much sigh ). Before it went outer of hand...I'm so sorry... Refrain |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
what language -do- you spell then, if not english? ^^ *just curious* oo and i love jagged edge, so that makes me like your music even better.  quote: oo situations like this suck.. sorry you've been through something like this. “A single choice can build destinies, or destroy them.” |
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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
Hi, glad you like this one, my first language is Danish... brian. |
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CloudedDreams Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 210My Fantasy Realm |
This is a really great song it has lots of emotions running with it and it expresses so much. Keep at it!! Yes there will be tommorrow, but will you be there to greet it? |
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xxxnuttyangelxxx Member
since 2002-12-06
Posts 72New York |
This was a great song..very deep meaning i enjoyed every line of it...good job shea |
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