Teen Poetry #6 |
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Meant to be? |
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ShadyMakaveli Member
since 2002-08-21
Posts 128 |
Torn and pulled apart When thinking about you You've captured my heart Wish I was able to tell you So many times i've wanted to Been close to speaking my feelings Expressing the love i have for you It's my heart you've been stealing Your held close in his arms Only wanting to be him as I observe Would shelter you from harm Provide you with everything you deserve You've caught my attention Constant thoughts through my head The best parts I didn't mention Speechless no words to be said For my actions should tell all Because words are unable to Without you I can't stand tall My love for you must be true No doubts in my mind Your the one for me We shall see with time If we were meant to be |
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xxxnuttyangelxxx Member
since 2002-12-06
Posts 72New York |
quote-- No doubts in my mind Your the one for me We shall see with time If we were meant to be This was a great last stanza. good work =) shea |
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Honey Member
since 2001-10-09
Posts 92Hot girl From Canada |
awesome write you better give it to her!!!! It Feels As If I've Always Been Someone On The Outside Looking In. |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
That was a beautiful poem, I truly enjoyed it! "For my actions should tell all, Because words are unable to." I especially liked thos lines. WinterWren |
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dinky Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 258 |
hey, i really liked this it was a very good poem ~samantha~ "sometimes i just feel like |
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